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[I Feel Fine]

Started by SplitX, November 24, 2009, 08:16:32 AM

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I will be recording this song on Youtube, hopefully within the next month. I will put up the link here once I make it, or make a thread about it elsewhere. <3 Many of y'all may know that I dated a guy who I thought was the guy of my dreams for about a year. He & I had a harsh breakup. We started talking again, and he tried to get back with me. Thankfully, I was talking to his ex & my friend about it,and I came to find out that he has a girlfriend already! She & I talked. She dumped him and I'm not planning on getting back with him. This all happened last night. It's still very painful for me, knowing that he was unfaithful for the entire year we'd dated, but at least now, I feel closure. After all, I didn't end up making the mistake that I could have. <3 So that's why I wrote this song last night. It's very shoddy, and I will probably add/remove/edit things about it, but right now, this is the general idea. It's going to be very upbeat with a touch of techno. <3 I am, in fact, a techno freak. I am probably Basshunter's most rabid fangirl ever. XD
Please give me critique, advice, comments, etc. I'm writing the sheet music during lunch today, 'cause I have the melody & everything already stuck fast in my head.<3
Anyway, onto the song!

I feel fine (I feel fine), I feel fine (I feel fine)
I feel fine (I feel fine), I feel fine (I feel fine)

I'm lookin' out from my bedroom window
and I'm just goin' with the flow
I feel good, I'm lettin' it show (lettin' it show)
I'm feelin' free, I'm lettin' off a glow
I finally smile when I say hello
I'm doin' fine, but you don't know (you don't know)

Now that you're gone (I feel fine)
So just move along ('cause I feel fine)
I wrote this song (now I feel fine)
'Cause you're not mine (and I feel fine)
I feel fine (I feel fine) I feel fine (I feel fine)
I feel fine (yeah I feel fine)

I'm walkin' down the street, lookin' good,
and I'm smilin' just because I should
I'm lettin' it show that I feel good (I feel good)
It's not something I just misunderstood
you played me just because you could
but it's okay, I'm done for good (done for good)

Now that you're gone (I feel fine)
So just move along ('cause I feel fine)
I wrote this song (now I feel fine)
'Cause you're not mine (and I feel fine)
I feel fine (I feel fine) I feel fine (I feel fine)
I feel fine (yeah I feel fine)

You thought I'd hit the ground
but I just turned it around.
Can't you see I haven't drowned?
Don't believe me? Then ask around

Now that you're gone (I feel fine)
'cause you did me wrong (but I feel fine)
I'm movin' on (now I feel fine)
and now I'm strong (I feel fine)
I feel fine (I feel fine) I feel fine (I feel fine)
I feel fine (I feel fine) I feel fine (yeah I feel fine)
I feel fine (you're not mine) I feel fine (just get in line)

I'm lookin' out from my bedroom window
and I'm just goin' with the flow
'cause I feel fine (I feel fine) I feel fine (I feel fine)
I feel fine (I feel fine) I feel fine
Yeah I feel fine.